Release: “Tsubuyaiter” by Kusui Aruta

As I was saying, little sisters are the best.

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Translator: Sliggoo
Typesetter: Palaxius
QC: Cadenza, Kyoraku, freudia

[Kusui Aruta] Tsubuyaiter (COMIC Megastore 2013-01) [English] [Team Koinaka]
[久水あるた] ツブヤイター (コミックメガストア 2013年1月号) [英訳]

Download: mega
Read Online: Fakku | ex | g.e

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6 comments on “Release: “Tsubuyaiter” by Kusui Aruta

  1. Hah hah, the attempt at lips with the mouth is often derpy-looking. Page five was noticeably sad. And ouch, her legs on page six….

    Hmm, can’t deny the allure her impishness & forwardness bestow…. Paired with the (mostly) great art? Exquisite.

    It would’ve been a decent second strike; however, going to have to be picky here, it doesn’t feel that there’s much that makes her a sister, much less the valued ‘imouto’. Are the ‘onii-chans’ & occasional ‘little sister’ really enough? It’s undeniably sensuous, but it feels that anything ‘good friends’ or better could work….

    Ah, on page six, is it ‘sati[sf]y’? Also, would ‘dick[s]’ be better?
    Not quite an error, but the last sentence reads oddly. It might be due to the redundancy of using both ‘however’ & ‘but’ in a short sentence.

    Looking forward to the next attempt~ Thanks!

    • Yeah, it should be “satisfy”. Goes to show that there are blind spots even when three quality checkers are involved. Overlooking even one mistake really irritates me, so I’ll try extra hard not to let that happen again. Thanks for pointing it out.

      –freudia

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